Walking through the hall at St. Mary's for a huge birthday for my nephew, Amusia. I walked through the hall door, as I looked behind me CRASH! I walked into the door as I was not paying atech what was in front of me. As I got up giggly and dizzy open the door and the warm air hit me. I started to slimy and close my eye. Feeling excited to open my eye to see what was going on. I open my eye and saw my sister walking toward me with a press in her hand. She ask me where do I put this press I reply saying. I don't know so me and her step left right, left right giggly because she didn't know what way to go. The smelly of the food got me walking towards it. My mouth grub as I saw the devilish food. I feel hungry for the food. Look outside seeing a base caste. I raining into it having fun, feeling happy and enjoy myself. I walk into the door slimy an happy and saw a perform of the cook island group dancing and shaking their hip.
WALHT write an interesting recount. I am trying to add more detail. I found it hard because trying to think of what word is next. Next time I want to remember to add bigger word into my story to make it more interesting. 